Jemma backed
away a little. Maybe she wasn’t ready for this.
“What are you doing
here? Please tell me.” Ashpaw repeated.
“Er- I was
looking for the clans.” Jemma replied absent mindedly.
“Oh. Well, you
are in the right place then. I am from Lightningclan. What is your name?” he
asked.
“My name is Jemma.
“Hi
Jemma. I am Ashpaw.”
But, however, there was no hostility in the young cat’s eyes. Only
curiosity. Suddenly Jemma was also curious. Just then, Bluepool and Cedarlight
padded up to the two young cats.
“Who is this?” Bluepool asked.
“This is Jemma.” Ashpaw answered.
“Let’s take her to camp, after she explains herself.”
Cedarlight suggested.
“I am from the Tallwalker gardens. I came here to seek refuge,
because they have treated me very poorly. I want to live among your clan.”
Jemma explained.
“Follow us then.” Bluepool meowed.
For some reason, Bluepool sounded troubled, but they padded off
to the camp anyway.
As they entered the forest, Jemma breathed a sigh of relief.
She felt sheltered under the woodland trees. They passed countless trees,
bushes, and rocks, all of them smelling of the forest. Jemma knew that this
would be a very good home for her.
Just then, Jemma scented lots of cats. The strong smell was
almost overwhelming. She knew that they were near the camp.
“This is our camp entrance.” Ashpaw told her, as he guided her
over to an opening in the thick undergrowth. As she squeezed through the entry.
When she entered the camp, she was amazed.
In front of her was about twenty cats, all busy with things
around the camp. When she entered, the cats’ heads all turned toward her almost
immediately. Cedarlight led Ashpaw, Bluepool, and her toward a den that was
behind a big tree.
When they arrived, he told Ashpaw, “Go with Bluepool and train.
I will take care of Jemma.”
Ashpaw opened his mouth to protest, but thought the better of
it, and he and Bluepool padded out of the camp again. Then Cedarlight turned to
her.
“This is our leader’s den. He will decide what to do with you.
Come now. Lightningstar is kind, and will not treat you harshly.” he said
tenderly.
Jemma was relieved. She was glad that Lightningstar was kind,
or else she could have a hard time earning her place in the clan.
As they entered the den, Cedarlight called out, “Lightningstar,
my patrol found this cat at the border. We brought her to you.”
A sleek black tom emerged from the shadows.
“Welcome, little one. What is your name?” he asked.
“I am Jemma. I do not mean any harm.” Jemma replied nervously.
“Of course you don’t mean harm, Jemma.” Lightningstar meowed
soothingly.
Jemma was amazed at his kindness. She had never been treated
with such respect.
“She says that she wishes to join Lightningclan.” Cedarlight
explained to the leader.
“Is this true?” Lightningstar asked her.
“It is.”
“Very well. I will talk it over with Squirrelfur, my loyal
deputy, and see what she thinks.”
Jemma was overjoyed, filled with such a blissful feeling that
she did not know how she would bear it. Lightningstar signaled Cedarlight to
leave with a flick of his tail, and Jemma followed him out of the den. If the
deputy agreed, she would be a clan cat!
The next few minutes seemed like hours, but finally,
Lightningstar called her into his den. Squirrelfur was with him.
“We have decided that you may stay, if you can learn the clan
ways and obey them.” the black leader meowed.
“Thank you! Thank you! You will not regret this! How do we
begin?” Jemma yowled in triumph.
“We begin like this.” replied LIghtningstar, and with a flick
of his tail, he padded out of the den, with Squirrelfur behind him. Jemma
followed eagerly.
The leader climbed or the tall tree that was in front of his
den, and yowled, “Let all cats gather here beneath Talltree for a clan
meeting!”
Then, before her very eyes, gathered a great multitude of cats,
all curiously looking up at the leader.
Lightningstar motioned Jemma to join him, and when she had
climbed up to him, he spoke again to the clan.
“This is Jemma. She is a kittypet, but was mistreated in her
life with the Tallwalkers. She has decided to join the clan, and Squirrelfur
and I have decided to let her into Lightningclan as an apprentice.”
Then he turned to Jemma.
“Jemma, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time
for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you have received your
warrior name, you will be known as Ripplepaw. Your mentor will be Talonshine. I
hope Talonshine will pass down all he knows to you.”
Then he turned to Talonshine.
“Talonshine, you are ready to take on an apprentice. You have
received excellent training, and have shown yourself to be fierce and brave.
You will be the mentor of Ripplepaw, and I expect you to pass on all you have
learned to her.” he meowed confidently.
The brown and red tabby looked surprised, but he waited below
the tree until his apprentice came to
him.
When she did, some of the clan started yowling, “Ripplepaw!
Ripplepaw! Ripplepaw!”
Now she was a full member of the clan. A new name, an new
mentor, a new friend, a new home. Ripplepaw was filled with such a jovial
feeling that she thought she would burst. This was her new life, and she knew
that she was going to be happy here. Just then, Ashpaw padded up to her.
“Nice name, Ripplepaw!” he said in congratulations.
“Thanks!” she meowed cheerfully.
Then Talonshine came up to her.
“Let me show you around the camp.” he said.
“See you later!” said Ashpaw, and than walked away.
As Ripplepaw and Talonshine walked around the camp, the new
apprentice was baffled on how large it was. There were kits, queens, warriors,
apprentices, elders, and even a medicine cat.
When the tour was over, her mentor showed her to the
apprentices’ den.
“This is where you will sleep.” he said.
Ashpaw was already there waiting for her. When Talonshine
walked away, he meowed,
“How was the tour?”
Ripplepaw was exhausted, but told him all about everything that
had happened.
Ashpaw showed her to a nest.
“This will be yours. It is next to mine.” her friend meowed.
“Thank you. I am bone-tired.” she said appreciatively.
Ripplepaw sank into her nest. It was soft and cozy.
“Good night.” Ashpaw meowed quietly, and then she plummeted
into darkness.
She awoke in a forest, so she looked around. There were many
things to see. There were bees, flowers, bushes, but the best things were the
trees. She climbed up one of them, and had a feeling of perfect sensation and
freedom. Then, she remembered that she did not know how to get down.
She felt her paws slip, and she searched franticly for a hold.
Fear replaced the freedom as she fell closer and closer to the ground. She
braced herself for pain, and then she hit. But there was no pain. Only a warm,
tingly feeling, that made her feel as if she could run forever. It had all
happened so fast, but as soon as that special feeling had come, it was gone.
Ripplepaw woke up. She had been awakened by Lightningstar’s
loud call. A call for a clan meeting.
She did not feel as if she had enough strength, but the feeling
in her dream came back, and she found that her strength was renewed.
She padded out of the den, and joined with the clan under
Talltree. Then she saw Ashpaw. He
was sitting beside Lightningstar, looking proud and brave. As soon as the clan
had quieted, the leader spoke.
“I am proud to say that this morning we will hold a naming
ceremony for Ashpaw.” Lightningstar said.
Then he turned to Bluepool. “Is your apprentice fit to become a
warrior?” he asked.
“He is.” Bluepool replied.
“Then he will be named.” he said, turning to Ashpaw, who was
shivering with excitement. “I, Lightningstar, leader of Lightningclan, call
apon my warrior ancestors to look down upon this apprentice. He has trained
hard to understand the ways of your oble code, and I commend him to you as a
warrior in his turn. Ashpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code, and protect
and defend this clan, even at the cost of your life?”
“I do.” Ashpaw replied boldly.
“Them by the powers of Starclan, I give you your warrior name:
Ashpaw, from this moment on you
will be known as Ashear. Starclan honors your bravery and courage, and we
welcome you as a full warrior of Lightningclan.” the leader meowed.
The newly named Ashear jumped down from the tree, and the whole
clan called out,
“Ashear! Ashear! Ashear!”
Ripplepaw joined in for a bit, but then realized that she yould
not be sleeping with Ashear tonight. He was a warrior now, so he would be
sleeping in the warrior’s den. She was only a new apprentice. It would be a
long time before she was able to be with him.
She sadly walked off to her den. Ashear would never be with her
there again.
Wonderful! I love this Chapter! Such excitement! Lots of new names. Hope you can take it all in! PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!! I would really appreciate some CC here. Thanks! (P.S. Can you tell that Ripplepaw has feelings?)
I really enjoyed this chapter. I especially appreciated having paragraph separation so that each new speaker had his own paragraph. I do get the feeling that Ripplepaw has feelings that will play a part in future chapters.
ReplyDeleteSo awesome! I could tell that Ripplepaw does have feelings and i really liked the spaces in the paragraphs.-Emma
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